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Saturday, July 24, 2010

Short + Sweet 2010 (3)

Another round of plays, another round of evaluation.

The 3rd programme for Short + Sweet was overall, comparatively slightly better than the 1st set, maybe by the virtue that most of the plays did not feel as draggy. However, most didn't seem "special". Maybe I've watched too many dramas. What was puzzling was why they would be classified as R18, except maybe the last one (I think my friend seemed to be noticeably uncomfortable with that). Maybe the language and themes were stronger on script than played out, or maybe some topics were sensitive, like Americans, culture, incest? Anyway, for this round, I'd group them into 3 categories: 1) ok, nothing outstanding/special; 2) not bad/good, but something seems to be missing; and 3) Good.

Cat 1
Gurus: This wasn't very interesting. Although it tried to incorporate some weak twists.
Interview of a Lifetime: This started off well in the 1st few minutes, but went down the drain thereafter.
Stolen: I was a little disappointed with this since my friend had told me his actor said it was good. It was a bit difficult identifying the twist, i.e. not strong. But it does address some social issues.
The Arrangement: Maybe I expected a modern setting, but the olden setting made it too cliche as a background for arranged marriages and story predictable.
Thickness of Blood: Well, this got a bit long-drawn at a certain point and the supposed twist was not as strong as it should have been, although the gist of the storyline might make a good Chinese drama if done rightly (think 雷雨).

Cat 2
Meeting with the Teacher: This was not bad, in the sense that it had a twist at the end that was strong enough. It started off as maybe a relational problem between the parents that turned to a conclusion that was pretty violent.
History of St Paul's: I kind of liked this as it was slightly funny at some parts and rather nice as a father-son relationship thingy.
Play (with) Misty for Me: This was a rather sweet and simple story of love and support between a couple. The interesting part was the way it was done - the couple spoke separately to the audience, and their conversation kind of affirmed each other though they were not speaking together as they related their stories. But they came together at the end. Interestingly, the male actor reminded me of my fencing instructor.
My Name is Art: This was not bad and somehow I think I related to it, since it talked about interpretation of art. Why would a pile of boxes be considered art? But the interesting thing part was the twist at the end where a man in only underwear (this should be the R18 part) appeared as a "touring exhibit", forcing the male lead to make a "donation", which actually turned out to be a scam.

Cat 3
Well, there's only 1 choice for this which was Some Are Meant to Sit, which was the best of the lot. The virtue of this play would be the wittiness of the script (conversation) as the 2-men cast "argue" over the right to sit and stand. It was done very Jack Sparrow style...wonder if you remember part 3 of Pirates where he was stranded at world's end and he started talking to other "him"s? But this can only be a short play as the story will go on and on as it reflects the constant struggle over "privilege". I wouldn't mind watching it again. However, I wonder if the Jack Sparrow imitation might prove detrimental.


I missed programme 2. What I would really like to see would be the turnip issue in one of the plays. From the synopses though, think programme 2 might have elicited more emotions from me...if done well. Anyway, I think this being a competition made me too analytical when watching the plays. One tries to compare each play and delve too deep. Maybe I should just sit back and relax without thinking too much?

Anyway, this contest has prompted me to think what genre of plays I would like to write. One would be horror (think Woman in Black) and another would be mystery/psychological thriller. But I would think these are quite difficult to write, requiring good twists.

4 comments:

  1. "Anyway, for this round, I'd group them into 3 categories: 1) ok, nothing outstanding/special; 2) not bad/good, but something seems to be missing; and 3) Good."

    Hmmmm....I'm rather confused by your classification system as there seems to be plenty of overlap. No clear distinction. Once again, you have given multiple options within the options, haha!

    Are they supposed to be in ascending order? Isn't 1 very similar to 2? Also, I noticed that both 2 and 3 carry the connotation of "good". What gives?

    "Play (with) Misty for Me: This was a rather sweet and simple story of love and support between a couple. The interesting part was the way it was done - the couple spoke separately to the audience, and their conversation kind of affirmed each other though they were not speaking together as they related their stories. But they came together at the end. Interestingly, the male actor reminded me of my fencing instructor."

    Someone commented to me that he felt the male actor for this was brilliant.

    "However, I wonder if the Jack Sparrow imitation might prove detrimental."

    Apparently the blatant Jack Sparrow impersonations for this play turned quite a few people off that night.

    "Maybe I should just sit back and relax without thinking too much?"

    Oh, I didn't know you were capable of that, haha!!!

    "Anyway, this contest has prompted me to think what genre of plays I would like to write. One would be horror (think Woman in Black) and another would be mystery/psychological thriller. But I would think these are quite difficult to write, requiring good twists."

    Genre is one thing, but the way in which it is written is just as important, if not more.

    And as I mentioned before, good twists aren't exactly paramount in a short play, although it would definitely be an advantage if your play had a good twist. As we've seen, there were a number of good plays that didn't have strong twists, but yet they were very well-written and well-received.

    Lastly, don't sit too long on it. Sometimes you just need to pick up the pen and start writing. If you just keep thinking about it...you'll never get started!

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  2. "Are they supposed to be in ascending order? Isn't 1 very similar to 2? Also, I noticed that both 2 and 3 carry the connotation of "good". What gives?"

    Yup, they're in ascending order. Nope, 1 is more like "average".
    2 is "it is generally good, but somehow it could be better; some element missing". It piqued my interest, but not enough to sustain it, or let me think more about it after that.
    3 is just good (period). No qualifiers added. It was enjoyable and I will probably remember it better.
    You notice I didn't put excellent. That will take a lot more and will be something that got me really "excited" to take certain actions. Like "Woman in Black", where I actually went to borrow the book.

    Sometimes, there's no clear distinction lah. And given they are in the semi-finals, then they should be "closer" in ranking than clear bad or good.

    "And as I mentioned before, good twists aren't exactly paramount in a short play"

    Well, for the kind I'm interested in writing, I think I would need it. And the genre really determines how you would go about the way it would be written.
    Usually I start but get stuck.

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  3. "Well, for the kind I'm interested in writing, I think I would need it. And the genre really determines how you would go about the way it would be written.
    Usually I start but get stuck."


    Jiayou! The journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.

    Yup, there will be obstacles when writing a play, or creating any piece of work for that matter. But therein lies the challenge!

    And when you've finally completed it, it's all the more sweeter.

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  4. Was just thinking, would it be easier to start with a novel/short story then convert it into a play thereafter?

    btw, blur me. I misinterpreted your question on whether it was in ascending order. No, the list isn't in ascending order. I kind of followed the sequence in the programme booklet.

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